BTEC Creative Media Production
Unit 2 Communication for Creative Media Production
Merit grade task:
On the reverse of this page is a genuine sample letter taken from a website that is intended to show students how to write a proposal letter to clients.
For whatever reason, it is very badly written.
You need to re-write any parts of the letter that you think need revision to make it read clearly in formal English.
Sample Advertising Proposal Letter
To Ryan Andrews,
PRO, Centric Advertisement Co.
Date: 6th June 2011
Subject: Advertising proposal for the yet to be released cosmetic product for men “X-men”
Dear Mr Andrews,
We would like to present to you an advertisement proposal related to the yet to be released cosmetic product “X-men” exclusively for men. We have always contributed significantly to the World’s Cosmetic Industry and development of various effective products for women. This is the first time we are releasing the new range of cosmetic products exclusively for men.
We believe that these products have been built with high technology and effective ingredients, which will satisfy our customer’s needs. Therefore, we want to regulate the advertisement procedures through various beauty magazines, channels and newspapers to reach our intended customer’s base effectively.
The budget and cost are negotiable on proposal acceptance. We are looking forward to your early response regarding our proposal.
Yours Sincerely,
George Madrew,
Ferine Cosmetics Ltd.
Sourced from sampleproposal.org
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